(This chapters going to be in Night paw from Wind Clans View!!YAY!)
Night paw padded around. It was a boring day, so he went out side of camp. "Boring as all ways.." He sighed and looked around. He went to the Border and noticed a she-cat there, just grooming herself like nothings wrong.. But he knew she was confused about something.. She smelt of River Clan. "Who are you?" He padded up to her and she flinched. "I'm Moon paw. You should know me from the last 2 gatherings." She smiled at him. He sat down, not sure what to do. "Why did you come to the border?" Night paw looked at her. She sighed. "I'm just worried bout stuff... Every ones nagging me back at camp to stop thinking.. And just fight.. They all think I'm in love with the apprentice Night paw at home." She sighed again, then stopped grooming herself."You mean that sleazy Night paw from that one gathering?" He looked at her, But didn't fully understand. "Yep.." She sighed and looked at the sky.. The sun was about to set. "I need to go back to camp.. See ya later, Night paw." She sighed a good-bye, and set off. "If that's the reason.. Why doesn't she just admit she likes some one else?" He thought sighing. "Wait.. Why am I concerned about her problems?" He asked him self. "Why's that..?" He looked around. Spotted pelt was hunting a rabbit, and was heading back to camp. Spottedpelt turned towards him and flicked a greeting. She left. "Better catch some thing.." He sighed once again and scented the air, by the time he was done.. He had caught 2 rabbits. "Better hurry or they'll get worried!" River paws voice sounded from the leafs. He stepped out and looked at Night paw. "I saw you with that Moon paw, Night paw." River paws voice was concerned."She just was worried bout back at her camp.. She had a few problems, but all we did was talk." Night paw replied, but he knew it was some thing different. River paw tilted his head. "So why did you sigh when she left?" River paw was gaining on what he was thinking, but he stopped when Soot leaf and Stream whisker padded out. "Come on you to. The rest of camp is getting concerned.
Tuesday, February 23, 2010
Chapter 3- Who is that?
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Sunday, February 21, 2010
Chapter two-Don't tell me!
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Cats
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Chapter one-Beat of the heart
"Moon kit? Whats wrong?" Flame poppy, one of the most respected queens asked."Nothing..." Moon kit lied, she knew it wasn't good to lie to Flame poppy. If any one was caught lying to her, then they got into trouble. Moon kit heard paw steps from the thorn barrier.Night storm, Storm paw, and Sky cloud came into camp with prey. "As the normal..." She thought. Night storm went to the fresh kill pile and dropped off 2 mice.Sky cloud brought a fish to the nursery."Flame poppy, here's a fish." He gave her the fish and left. Even thought he wasn't Flame poppy's mate, he still cared for her."He should really stop." Flame poppy said quietly. Moon kit sighed. Night storm walked around to the warriors den. Same as always, Tangle path was sunning himself on a rock, and Sparrow night was talking to Tangle path. Feather heart was, as always, Trying to impress Raven flight, and last of all, the sun was setting already."It is time..." Snow flower, the deputy, called to Moon kit, and her sister and mother, Frozenkit and Lily frost."Time for what?" Frozen kit asked, following Snow flower."To become apprentices, duh." Moon kit teased Frozen kit.Night kit followed.Night kit was the son of Snow flower, who had become deputy when Nightkit was confirmed ready to be a apprentice."Night kit,Frozen kit, and Moon kit are ready to become apprentices!" Flower star said. "Night kit, Frozen kit, and Moon kit! Do you promise to uphold the warrior code with you life's?" They all said yes. "Then on my own name, I pronounce you apprentices! You shall be Night paw, And your mentor shall be Cloud heart!Frozen paw, your mentor shall be Summer sun! And Moon paw! Your mentor shall be Raven flight!"
The clan cheered, but Moon paw felt weird. "Whats this feeling..?" She thought. Her mind flashed with a weird feeling... She didn't know what it was.. But she felt just.. strange."What is going on..?" She kept trying to think of it not there, but it would stay. She looked around a little. Once her gaze hit Night paw,The feeling got more intense. "What's going on?? Every time I look at him.. I have this weird feeling!" She thought. Her heart pounded with a strange feeling.. It was very different to her. "Don't tell me... " She froze.
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Prologue:
Moon kit looked around. "Moon kit... Do you know who I am..?" A voice rang through the air."N-no.." She shyly looked around. The voice sounded like a tom, but she could only see thick mist."You don't...? You should.. I was the one who died for you.." The toms deep voice was familiar."Brother..?" Moon kit asked. "Good... Now follow my voice.. I will show you some thing only you may know..." His voice kept repeating, so it was hard to follow his voice. "I'm here.." She said as she saw the shape of another cat. But the cat looked at her with evil amber eyes. "Who summoned you?" The cats voice was different from the voice which had been calling her. "Stay back." A tom came in front of her. He had purple eyes, but a black pelt and a little white spot on his belly."What do you want Frosted blood?" The evil tom smiled as the other tom asked. "I don't know really. I was looking for some prey, and looky here. A little she-cat padding around looking for some one.. I'm guessing its you, Hawk night." Frosted blood replied, but looking at Moon kit. "Whats going to happen?" She thought.. But then the two cats faded. Every thing was gone, and she found herself in a nest of feathers, her mother and her sister sleeping. "Remember this young one, Those two cats were me, and Frosted blood.. But here are my words.." He paused and took a breath,But started soon again."One moon.. That rises to a star.. Is protected by the Night.. But The frost may come back to one place, where the Moon may die.. Only one decides if the Moon shall die."
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Story
Please read! This is a story im going to work really hard on!
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